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I am a chinese, born in shanghai, 21 yrs old , study in shanghai until 9th grade, and come to US. I was in LA and I had 2 high schools in LA, one is catholic and the other one is christian. and I come to purdue university and try to graduate. major is undecided and try to get in to sales and selling management. hobby: basketball, work out, stock market, video game. My father was a professor in college and now is a business man, my mom was a teacher in high school and now is a ceo in a education company